The days in shanghai

How time flies! It is been a long time since I left for shanghai. Now, I would show you what I have done in this city.

July twenty-fifth afternoon, it was my first afternoon in Shanghai. Our plane landing at PuDong airport about 4:00 p.m.. Mr.Wang, the pal of Dad was wating us in the arrival hall. it was a long way from airport to our hotel. During the way, the beautifull scenery and modern buildings made me so excited!  Ha, Shanghai, I’m coming!

Our hotel is located on the Nanjing Road. Nanjing Road is the most famous street in Shanghai, so it is always very crowded. Lots of people come form all over the world. In this street you could see every kinds of the people. It is a walking only street, traffic come in is not permit,  except the tour cars.

The second day, my father took me to the Shanghai Science & Ttechnology Building. There are so many kinds of new and good things, so I enjoyed myself very much. The building is quite large, we had lunch inside, then we visited every exhibition hall as soon as possible. Beacause we would visit another place----East Pearl.  In despite of  we tried our fast, but when we arrived at the East Pearl, it was three o’clock that afternoon. Bought two tickets, we walked into the tower to take the lift. The lift’s speed is very quickly---- seven meters every second. When I open my eyes, we arrived at the tour floor, it is two hundreds and sixty-three meters high. We could see the scenery very clearly, everything looked like under our feet and quite small. I like the feeling very much. Left the East Pearl, we went for a ride in the subway, the subway was very clean, but too crowded.

In the evening we had Shanghai snack for supper. They are all very delicious, you could try to taste them by yourself.

You know, there are so many departement stores in Shanghai, So the third day, my mother took me to do some shopping. We went to the DongFangHuiFengPacific departement store and some other famous departement stores. When we got back to the hotel, my legs were too tired. I took shower very quickly, then had a good sleep.

 The fourth day came quite soon. After two hours by bus, Dadmy friend-beibei and me arrived in ZhouZhuang. Oh, it is more beautiful than I thought. There is a river, some small boats come and go in it. How nice! In there, nearly all the shops sells pig’s arms. We had it for lunch, the taste of it is really very nice, I like it a lot. In the afternoon, we gone to TongLi. It is also a lovely village, smaller than ZhouZhuang. There are a lot of trees and lakes, it makes people feel quite easy going. We took quite a lot of photos there, I don’t know how to use the words to describe it is, you must go there by yourself and see.

The last morning, my father and me gone to the Tropic Storm Amusement Park. In that day, the sun was shining brightly. I played very happily that day untill the time for us to take the plane return Xiamen. Now my mother said that I looked like a Negro.

That is all I have done in Shanghai. Oh, I forgot an important thing------I have visited the TongJiFuDang and Shanghai foreign language university. Now, I must study harder and harder, I hope I will pass the examination three years later, and be a college student in Shanghai foreign language university.

Shanghai, my dream would come ture!

                                   Lin Xiaohan    2002/8/28

附:这是我第一次写英语作文写得那么多的,虽然我知道错得很多,但这毕竟是我的第一次,所以我还是十分高兴的。说实话,我的作文水平真的是还有待提高啊!